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B : unexceptional, but reasonably well done See our review for fuller assessment.
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The World in my Hands is set in the fictional nation of Pandua, but that is just a thinly-veiled Bangladesh -- down to the geography, Pandua too: "not so much a land mass as it was a vast and transformed water body".
Dominated by two parties -- the Patriotic Party of Pandua and the Social Democratic Party -- and the endless feud of their 'Two Leaders', the political situation is also much as it has been in contemporary Bangladesh for many years.
The laws were so numerous, so dated, it was impossible to conduct the ordinary business of living without becoming guilty. For anyone with ambition, the risks and entrapment was compounded manifold.Since everyone is unavoidably guilty of something, proof is easily found, so the key is not to be targeted; Hissam warns Kaiser, and invites him to support the regime to help himself out, but Kaiser is pure business -- and winds up on one of the infamous Lists. His businesses are affected -- but in Pandua that's just another annoyance to deal with. But Kaiser is a bigger fish who can play a useful role by turning on an even bigger fish, and so he can't escape the clutches of those in power, who want him to become a pawn. Natasha is the founder of "the first organization in Pandua devoted to aiding street children", but also finds herself in an increasingly politicized environment, as the growing organization is going in directions she doesn't like; she too faces difficulty with her board of directors. Personal feelings also complicate matters -- Hissam and Natasha have remained good friends, but there's a lingering sense of what might have been between them, and Natasha may well be one of the reasons he hasn't settled down yet. Meanwhile, Kaiser, obsessed with work, has been paying less attention to his wife. And then Hissam finally begins a meaningful relationship -- but the American he gets involved with can't stand Natasha. The national crisis grows worse, to the extent that even Hissam is ready to leave the country pretty much at a moment's notice, if need be. Ready to commit to his new girlfriend, Duniya, he also finds his relationship with Kaiser and Natasha interfering with that -- even as that relationship, too, has possibly been irreversibly damaged by his actions. The World in my Hands is a reasonably engaging story of a situation and conditions much like those in contemporary Bangladesh. The perspective tends to be that of the ultra-privileged -- they all seem to have drivers, for example, and even Kaiser's business troubles don't seem to make the slightest dent in his family's extremely comfortable lifestyle -- but the rabble also are presence. Among the diagnoses on offer for why the country is such a mess is one given by a foreigner who has tried his luck in Pandua but hasn't been nearly as successful as he wishes: It's the people. You guys hate wealth. You want a little pile for yourselves for the little vacations and weddings, college and medicals and the retirement. The reconditioned car, replaced every ten years. But you don't want real wealth. You don't see the splendour of it, the sheer delight of it. You fear it and make a virtue out of that fear, a cult out if [sic] it.Hence also, presumably, Kaiser -- the one with the most ambition, who takes the biggest risks -- is the one who tumbles furthest. The biggest weakness of the novel is that it does not focus on one protagonist consequentially enough. Much of the novel seems to be about Hissam, closely following him and his actions -- but at its conclusion we barely know what became of him. Kaiser figures reasonably prominently but remains something of a cipher, explored for a while and then left alone -- even as the action he takes is arguably the most significant. Natasha's doings seem secondary for much of the novel, but it is she who comes to the fore at the end -- not out of nowhere, but still seeming a bit out of place, given how much attention previously had been lavished on Hissam and Kaiser. Seeing the story through with Hissam at its center -- or Natasha more front and center from the beginning -- would have made for a stronger and more cohesive narrative. The episodes and overall arc are fairly well done, and there's a good sense of the country and many of the issues. Some of the personal conflicts -- romantic and professional -- feel a bit forced or awkward, but there's enough variety and certainly enough tension to sustain interest. The World in my Hands isn't entirely successful in its ambitions, but it's considerably more than just an amateur effort. Ahmed tries to do a great deal, and he does much of it quite well. The result may not be entirely polished or successful, but it's a solid effort. - M.A.Orthofer, 21 June 2015 - Return to top of the page - The World in my Hands:
- Return to top of the page - Bangladeshi author K. Anis Ahmed is the publisher of the Dhaka Tribune. - Return to top of the page -
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